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書面表達(dá)（半）開放類

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?????(半)開放式書面表達(dá)：指給出很少的提示或近乎命題作文，這種題要求考生發(fā)揮想象把文章的內(nèi)容合理地表達(dá)出來。也有的是給出漫畫、一句話或一種情景，讓考生根據(jù)自己的理解寫作文，即給出漫畫、主題或兩三點提示，由考生去發(fā)揮、構(gòu)思。

(半)開放作文形同于書面表達(dá)，但又不等同于書面表達(dá)，因為書面表達(dá)往往給出較為詳細(xì)的提示（文字提綱式、文字+圖畫式、或圖表式），考生在組織短文時，完全可以把這些提示當(dāng)作短文的提綱或線索；考生在表達(dá)時，只需沿著這條線索思維即可，留給考生進(jìn)行發(fā)散思維的空間不多。而＂(半)開放作文＂是一種限制相對較少、留給考生更多自由發(fā)揮空間的、考查學(xué)生書面表達(dá)能力的一種新題型。這種題型只給出主題，也就是說只告訴你正在或?qū)⒁l(fā)生什么事情，至于事情發(fā)生的過程、結(jié)果則完全由考生自己去發(fā)揮，考生的思維完全可以發(fā)散。所以，考生的思路不同，寫出的作文就會是千人千面。

常見的(半)開放式作文命題形式

標(biāo)題式

標(biāo)題式(半)開放作文的命題形式往往是要求考生圍繞一個特定的話題去寫作。＂標(biāo)題式(半)開放作文＂實際上相當(dāng)于漢語的命題式作文，考生只要圍繞題目中所給的特定的話題說明、敘述、舉例，加上談?wù)勛约旱母邢牖虬l(fā)表自己的看法就可以了。

漫畫式

漫畫式(半)開放作文以北京高考為代表。命題形式往往是要求考生圍繞一幅漫畫去寫作。然而，相對于＂標(biāo)題式＂(半)開放作文而言，＂漫畫式＂(半)開放作文的寫作難度更大。

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＂(半)開放作文＂的?？嘉捏w有兩種：記敘文和議論文。

＂記敘式開放作文＂一般給出一段材料，然后要求考生沿著材料的縱橫發(fā)展方向，充分發(fā)揮想象力，拓展原材料內(nèi)容；同時運用邏輯推理方法，進(jìn)行謀篇布局；最后串詞成句，連句成文。總結(jié)起來就是，＂記敘式(半)開放作文＂要求考生靈活處理所給材料，做到綜合分析，辯證思考，提煉觀點，力求論點合理，論據(jù)充分，論證嚴(yán)密。

＂議論式(半)開放作文＂則要求考生根據(jù)所提供的信息材料(一般為漫畫)，在描述漫畫信息之余，發(fā)揮自己的想象，展開簡單的議論，并略談自己的觀點和看法。總結(jié)起來就是，＂議論式(半)開放作文＂要求考生圍繞所給漫畫的信息，簡要地進(jìn)行描述，辯證思考，提煉觀點，力求論點合理，發(fā)人深思。值得注意的是：近年來，北京卷＂(半)開放作文＂傾向于＂就圖論事＂、＂就圖明理＂?？梢哉f，＂議論式(半)開放作文＂與現(xiàn)在流行的新課改、新課程、新課標(biāo)非常吻合，也與流行的研究性學(xué)習(xí)、探究性學(xué)習(xí)非常一致，既迎合了當(dāng)前教學(xué)潮流，又對潮流有一定的引領(lǐng)和推動作用。因此，考生要注意訓(xùn)練自己圍繞圖片，總結(jié)寫作要點的能力。另外，看圖類文章的審題難度要略大于文字類文章的審題難度，所以考生在平時的訓(xùn)練中應(yīng)該加強(qiáng)對解圖能力的訓(xùn)練。

第一步、描述漫畫內(nèi)容

描述漫畫內(nèi)容的基本條件是看懂漫畫。要求是：審圖要準(zhǔn)，定位要清；描述時言簡意賅，不可越位；要注意：不要花太多時間挖掘圖畫深意！因為(半)開放作文不看重你的思想厚度，而看重你的語言質(zhì)量。

第二步、闡述對漫畫的理解

所謂對漫畫的理解，是指圍繞漫畫反映的基本事實進(jìn)行較為細(xì)致的解釋和自己的看法、感想或人生感悟等。要求是：邏輯清晰，合情合理。

根據(jù)以上兩個步驟，我們可以這樣認(rèn)為：＂(半)開放作文＂只要求你做兩件事情，一件是描述圖畫（describe the following picture），另一件是闡述你對圖畫解釋和看法（explain how you understand it）。相應(yīng)地，你只需要寫兩個段落，一段是＂描述段＂，另一段是＂議論段＂。

1.＂描述段＂的寫法：第一句可以使用如下句式： In the picture, there is…等。 ＂描述段＂的功能就是傳達(dá)圖畫中的信息，向讀者交代圖畫內(nèi)容，所以必能使用＂there be＂句型。另外，＂描述段＂的另一個功用即：為第二段的議論埋下伏筆。

2.＂議論段＂的寫法：＂議論＂段的首句有個固定的句式，即：In my opinion, the picture is meaningful and wonderful as well.等。如何發(fā)議論呢？所謂議論，就是根據(jù)圖畫信息，表達(dá)你的看法、感想。考生不必過深地挖掘圖畫信息，只需用簡單的英文，表達(dá)平易的道理。換句話說，只要你能用正確的英文表達(dá)你的感想，便贏得了勝利。

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Writing 1(2016·新課標(biāo)全國卷I)

假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外資公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷(resume)。給外教Ms Jenkins 寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式(forma)。

注意：

?????1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

?????2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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【寫作思路】

該題雖然也是文字提示，屬于書信體應(yīng)用文寫作，但它同往年的命題形式大不相同。寫作要點沒有單獨羅列出來，而是包含在題目要求中，這對考生審題和構(gòu)思提出了較大的挑戰(zhàn)，這是前所未有的創(chuàng)新。

經(jīng)過認(rèn)真審題，我們可以確定本文的寫作要點有：

（1）簡單介紹自己、解釋緣由；

（2）說明寫信的目的——修改文字和格式；

（3）提示所附材料在哪里；

（4）表示感謝。

試題的情景是考生日常生活中熟悉的事情，題目要求明確、清晰，開放性很強(qiáng)，給考生留下了很大的自主發(fā)揮的空間。

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Dear Ms Jenkins,

I am Li Hua. I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.

In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.

Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【名師點睛】

本文是一篇考生們熟悉的書信類體裁的書面表達(dá)，內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生生活，所以人人有話可說。文章沒有給出開頭和結(jié)尾，所以考生要注意書信的格式，包括稱呼語、正文以及結(jié)束語等。在寫作時要注意先列出寫作要點，而且要注意將來時、現(xiàn)在時以及現(xiàn)在完成時的交錯使用；注意使用高級句式和多種結(jié)構(gòu)的使用，而且語氣要委婉、禮貌。

【名師點睛】

本文是一篇較為優(yōu)秀的范文。格式正確，要點全面，語言通順、流暢，很好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。在本文中開頭提出寫信的目的，然后具體講述自己的困難，再提出請求，最后表達(dá)自己的感激之情。所以在內(nèi)容上邏輯性較強(qiáng)。此外，作者還使用了不定式短語In order to get some practical experience, 現(xiàn)在分詞短語hoping you can give me some help, 賓語從句if there are something to pay attention to等。經(jīng)典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personal resume也是文章的亮點所在。

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Writing?2(2016·浙江卷)

＂Planning is good,?but doing is better＂是一句英國名言。請以此為題用英語寫一篇100~120詞的短文。要求如下：

?????1. 簡述你對這句名言的理解；

?????2. 用一個具體事例加以說明；

?????3. 給出恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。

注意：

1. 文章的標(biāo)題已給出（不計詞數(shù)）；

??????2. 文中不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學(xué)校、老師或同學(xué)姓名等真實信息，否則按作弊行為認(rèn)定。

Planning Is Good, But Doing Is Better

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【寫作指導(dǎo)】

本文為一篇開放式作文。題目給出標(biāo)題和提綱。結(jié)合題目可判斷出主要是介紹將計劃付諸實施的重要性。圍繞這個主旨去寫，不能跑題。提綱部分還要求三個方面：1.?簡述你對這句名言的理解；2.?用一個具體事例加以說明；3.?給出恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。這就確定了作文的結(jié)構(gòu)框架。在主旨和結(jié)構(gòu)確定下來后，還要注意文章應(yīng)用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時、一般過去時。寫作時發(fā)揮自己的想象，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將文章完整地表述出來。注意要主次分明、詳略得當(dāng)，語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔，同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章自然連貫。最后要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況、有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

【參考范文】

Planning Is Good, But Doing Is Better

Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do what we want to do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.

My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.

I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.

【名師點睛】

本篇范文短小精悍，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，語言簡潔，時態(tài)、人稱準(zhǔn)確，很好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。在文章開頭，作者緊扣題目，提出自己對plan的理解，同時引出下文，然后用自己的親身經(jīng)歷表明要將計劃付諸實施非常重要。在文中，作者用到了短語in detail, bear no fruit, carry out, set out to等短語，避免了文章表達(dá)的單一。此外，還用到了賓語從句how we do和how I achieved my success, 以及句型It came from good planning and better doing combined等，這些都給文章增加了亮點。

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Writing?3(2015·浙江卷)

在班級活動中，當(dāng)你的想法與大多數(shù)同學(xué)不一致時，你是堅持自己的觀點并說服別人，還是尊重大多數(shù)同學(xué)的意見？請你以＂When I Have a Different Opinion＂為題，用英語寫一篇100~120個詞的短文。要求如下：

1. 從以上兩種做法中選擇一種；

2.?以具體事例闡述你選擇的理由。

注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學(xué)校、同學(xué)姓名等真實信息。否則，按考試作弊行為認(rèn)定。

When I Have a Different Opinion

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【寫作指導(dǎo)】

本篇書面表達(dá)陳述觀點及理由

寫作時注意以下幾點：

1.?仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確從以上兩種做法中選擇一種，是堅持自己的觀點并說服別人還是遵從大多數(shù)同學(xué)的意見。

2.?提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想像。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。

3.?根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。但是在以具體事例闡述的時候使用過去時

4.?注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【參考范文】

Possible?version 1:

When I Have a Different Opinion

We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.

Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day. Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.

Possible?version 2:

When I Have a Different Opinion

We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.

The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism, I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.

Writing?4(2014·湖南卷)

學(xué)校正在組織科技創(chuàng)新大賽，你想為日常生活中某件物品(如鋼筆、書包、鞋子……)設(shè)計添加新功能來參賽。請以＂My Magic ________＂為題寫一篇英語短文，介紹你的創(chuàng)意。

內(nèi)容：

1. 說明設(shè)計理由；

2.?介紹新功能。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)不少于120個；

2.?不能使用真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

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【參考范文】

My Magic Shoes

As is known to us all, shoes play an important role in our life, for it can protect our feet from being hurt. However, as a boy who has athlete’s foot, I am looking forward to inventing a pair of shoes helping my feet keep dry and me walk conveniently. Therefore, this new kind of shoes has come into being recently.

To keep the feet dry and comfortable, this new kind of shoes is equipped with a micro-fan. When you walk, a small machine changes the energy produced by walking into electric energy and stores it. If you stop walking, the micro-fan can work immediately to dry your feet. However, what amazes you most is the following new function. There is a special red button in each of the shoes. If the road you are walking is flat, you can press the red button, which helps your shoes change into a roller skate with two rollers appearing beneath your shoes, and you can reach your destination quickly. On arriving at your destination, press the red button again and the rollers will return to your shoes, so you can walk normally like others.

That’s my magic shoes. Do you like them?or would you like to have a try??

Writing?5(2013·江蘇卷)

請根據(jù)你對以下兩幅圖的理解，以"Actions Speak Louder than Words"為題，用英語寫一篇作文。

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參考詞匯：?banner (橫幅)　stump (樹樁)

你的作文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：

1.簡要描述兩幅圖的內(nèi)容；

2.概述你對兩幅圖中不同做法的理解；

3.舉例說明兩幅圖對你的啟示。

注意：

1.可參照圖片適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2.作文詞數(shù)150左右；

3.作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。

Actions Speak Louder than Words

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【參考范文】

Actions Speak Louder than Words

People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.

The message conveyed here is clear: "Actions speak louder than words." Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees to better the environment.

Actions are important in other fields, too. Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams. Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.

【寫作指導(dǎo)】

此篇書面表達(dá)要求我們運用夾敘夾議的寫作手法：第一段我們先對兩幅圖進(jìn)行簡單的描述；第二段對圖片內(nèi)容進(jìn)行分析；最后一段將分析的結(jié)果運用到我們生活實際當(dāng)中，此段是重點,應(yīng)當(dāng)多用一些筆墨。

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Writing?1（2019屆陜西省重點高中高考模擬）

假如你叫李華，你的美國筆友Tom對你最近的中國國學(xué)經(jīng)典（Chinese classics）學(xué)習(xí)非常感興趣.他想請你介紹你最近學(xué)習(xí)課程的情況，請為他回信。內(nèi)容包括：

1.很開心收到來信；

2.課程情況；

3.美好祝愿。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：端午節(jié)the Dragon Boat Festival

Dear Tom，

I'm more than delighted to be informed that you show great interest in traditional Chinese classics.

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Yours，

Li Hua

【范文】

Dear Tom，

I'm more than delighted to be informed that you show great interest in traditional Chinese classics.?I would like to introduce my own experience about learning Chinese classics to you，which is likely to benefit you.?

I take classes three times a week and each class lasts one hour.?The professor has a good knowledge of Chinese classics and has a sense of humour so that all the students are absorbed in the classes.?Now we know a lot about ancient literature，art，traditions and great ideas that are passed down by generation after generation.?By learning it I am proud of our ancestors'?wisdom and civilization they created.

In my opinion，If you want to know more about China，you ought to learn Chinese classics showing the soul and spirit of China.?At the same time，I wish more people around the world like you are interested in Chinese classics and know more about China.?

【點評】這是一篇開放式作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來。動筆前一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題.所以我們應(yīng)該做到以下幾點：一、認(rèn)真審題，明確表達(dá)要點。二、謀篇布局。三、遣詞：根據(jù)要點及構(gòu)思的提綱，我們可以初步確定文章中可能用到的詞匯。四、造句：把文章的主旨了然于心，再加上詞匯的鋪墊，接下來造句，注意上下文的過度要自然，使文章更加流暢，可讀性強(qiáng).

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Writing?（2019屆廣東省東莞市高三二模）

假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華.你校將于2019年3月30日舉辦“大灣區(qū)與我”（The Greater Bay Area and Me）英文演講比賽，以加強(qiáng)粵港澳姐妹學(xué)校間的交流與合作。11所高中共30位學(xué)生將參加全天比賽。請給外教史密斯先生寫一封電子郵件，邀請他當(dāng)評委并作點評。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫.

【范文】

Dear Smith，

I am Li Hua，the president of the Students'?Union.?We will hold an English speech contest at our school on March 30 and I'd like to invite you to be its judge.?

This contest is intended to strengthen ties and co-operation between sister schools in Guangzhou.?Hong Kong and Macau.?The theme is"?The Greater Bay Area and Me"，and a total of 30 students from different high schools will participate.?Should you accept，you'd be expected to grade and provide some feedback on each student's presentation.?I?know the students would be very grateful for your participation.?

If you could get back to me with your decision by the end of the week，it would be greatly appreciated.?

Yours,

?Li Hua

【點評】

英語寫作是一項主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題。它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力。在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧。

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Writing 3（2019屆山東省青島市高三一模）

假如你是李明，你發(fā)現(xiàn)部分同學(xué)每次遇到考試，都會出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀。請你用英語寫一封信，向某學(xué)生英文報編輯反映該問題，并據(jù)此提出一些建議。

請根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容，完成表格。

Many students have some symptoms（癥狀）of anxiety（焦慮）before they take an exam every time.?Some of them feel nervous，some will feel dizzy or tired，some will suffer from lack of sleep，and some will lose their appetite（胃口）.As a matter of fact，all these symptoms have terrible effects on their exams and they are all eager to get rid of them.

How should they do then？

Please complete the following form

Worksheet

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【寫作分析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于開放類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是李明，你發(fā)現(xiàn)部分同學(xué)每次遇到重要考試，都會出現(xiàn)一些焦慮癥狀.請你用英語寫一封信，向某學(xué)生英文報編輯反映該問題，首先要先根據(jù)英文提示完成下面的表格，寫作時注意以下幾點：

一、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：

1.焦慮癥狀（symptoms of anxiety）：頭暈、疲憊、睡眠不好、沒有食欲等。

2.建議：a.對考試有一個好的態(tài)度，考前制定好合適的復(fù)習(xí)計劃：b.考試期間確保有足夠的睡眠，不要熬夜；c.睡前洗熱水澡、喝熱牛奶等有助于睡眠。

二、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)憽?/span>

三、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)。

四.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：

Only in this way can we avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.（高分句型一）句中使用了only+狀語，句子使用半倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)

只有這樣，才能避免考試的壓力。

Third，we can try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed，which might help us to have a sound sleep.（高分句型二）句中which might help us to have a sound sleep為非限制性定語從句

第三，我們可以在睡前洗個熱水澡或喝一杯溫牛奶，這樣可以幫助我們睡個好覺.

【范文】

Dear editor.

I?am Li Ming of Senior Three，Guangming Middle School.?I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.?

Most of us feel nervous whenever we're taking an important exam.?Some will feel dizzy or tired，some will suffer from lack of sleep.?So?I?want to give some advice about it.?

First，in my opinion，it's important for us to have a good attitude to exams.?We should study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam.?Only in this way can we avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.?Second，during the period of exams，make sure that we have enough sleep.?we should not stay up too late.?Third，we can try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to be d，which might help us to have a sound sleep.

I hope these advice above can help us achieve high grades during the exams.?

Best wishes

Li Ming

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Writing?4（2019屆河南省開封市高考模擬）

假如你是李華，是一名高中生。近幾年來，隨著環(huán)保意識的增強(qiáng)，各地相繼頒布禁止在春節(jié)期間燃放鞭炮的決定。請你進(jìn)一步解釋說明禁放鞭炮對的益處，號召人們不斷提高自我意識，貢獻(xiàn)自己的一份力量。

注意：

1.字?jǐn)?shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫.

3.參考詞匯；鞭炮firecrackers

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【范文】

I am Li?Hua who is from a senior school.?In recent years I have realized a growing number of people have become aware of protecting the environment.?For example，the ban that fireworks are forbidden to set off during the Spring Festival has been announced in many areas in China.?I think it is necessary to take measures to improve the quality of air.?

Every year it is because of setting off fireworks that fires take place frequently which makes people injured and even causes deaths.?In addition，setting off fireworks not only wastes money but pollutes air which does harm to people's health.?Now that setting off fireworks can't benefit us why not give it up？?

In order to live a happy life let us go against setting off fireworks hand in hand and give ourselves a beautiful home.?

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Writing5(河北省保定市2019屆高三摸底考試)

進(jìn)入高三以來，同學(xué)們倍感學(xué)習(xí)壓力，有的同學(xué)熬夜學(xué)習(xí)，甚至課間十分鐘也不放過。假設(shè)你是李華，請針對這一現(xiàn)象，在penpal world.com網(wǎng)站上用英語發(fā)表一下自己的看法，與外國中學(xué)生進(jìn)行交流。

??注意：1.?詞數(shù)100左右。

????????2.?可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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【參考范文】

Hi Fellows,

I’m Li Hua, a senior high student from China. I’d like to share something with you. Since the beginning of senior high, the learning burden makes us students feel more stressed. Many of us often sit up late at night fighting for the College Entrance Exam; even a ten-minute break won’t be let go.

As far as I know, lack of sleep does great harm to our health. For one thing, we can’t concentrate in class if we don’t get enough sleep. For another, we may get angry and impatient easily. By the same token, a ten-minute break is definitely necessary, which can help us get rid of tiredness and focus on next class period. A famous proverb goes well, ＂All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy＂. How about your situation and opinion?

Looking forward to your reply.

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Writing 1

如何理解"合作"，不同的人有不同的看法。請認(rèn)真閱讀下面的引語(quotation)，按要求用英語寫一篇短文。

"United we stand， divided we fall."

內(nèi)容要求：

1.你對該引語的理解；

2.你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷；

3.你所得出的結(jié)論。

注意：1.短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；

3.詞數(shù)100左右。

This quotation tells us that______________________________________________________________

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【參考范文】

This quotation tells us that unity is strength. Whenever we are faced with difficulties, cooperation plays a significant role in getting us out of trouble.

???There was a time when I was so skilled in playing basketball that I became so proud. However, after we lost a game due to the fact that I overlooked my partners and refused to cooperate with them, my coach made me realize the importance of cooperation. ?Later on, not only did I cooperate with others in the game but also I learned to help others and turned to them for help. Surely cooperation made a big difference and helped our team make many achievements.

From this experience I learn that only if we attach much importance to cooperation can we win.

【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)為提綱類開放式作文。"合作"這一話題非常貼合考生生活實際，讓考生有東西可以寫，符合高考的命題趨勢?？忌鷮懽髦氨仨氄J(rèn)真審題，本題寫作需要包含三部分內(nèi)容：首先簡述對該引語的理解，即提煉主題——合作的重要性。然后講述一段自己的經(jīng)歷，說明這一主題。最后得出結(jié)論——重申合作的重要性。注意描述具體事例時要用過去時態(tài)，人稱用第一人稱，內(nèi)容要緊緊圍繞"合作"這一主題，最后要有總結(jié)，形成首尾呼應(yīng)。

寫作素材

1.面臨， 面對be faced with

2.在某方面起著重要的作用play a significant role in...

3.曾經(jīng)有一段時間……?There was a time when...

4.向某人求助turn to sb. for help

5.與某人相處得好get along well with sb.

6.有重大影響make a big difference

7.取得成績make achievements

8.認(rèn)為……十分重要attach much importance to...

?文章分三段來寫，首段提煉出unity is strength 這一主題；第二段圍繞"團(tuán)結(jié)就是力量"講述了一件發(fā)生在自己身上的事情；尾段再次強(qiáng)調(diào)團(tuán)結(jié)的重要性。團(tuán)結(jié)這一主線貫穿文章始末，主題鮮明，語言流暢。

Writing 2

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你校英文報紙開辟了一個專欄：Experience。本期話題是如何面對失敗。請你寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/span>

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.短文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息。

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【參考范文】

As high school students, we have to admit that failure is part of our life.?Difficulties can arise now and then, which may cause us repeated failure. And it’s impossible for us to get rid of them completely. But we can develop the right attitude towards failure.

???When faced with failure, I never feel upset, blame others or complain about the environment. Instead, I remain optimistic and regard every failure as an opportunity to learn. If we can draw a lesson from each failure, we’ll be on the right way to success. Therefore, in the face of failure, take your courage. What’s more, if necessary, turn to your classmates and teachers for help.

【寫作指導(dǎo)】

這是一篇開放式作文，給出了寫作話題——如何面對失敗，讓考生在此基礎(chǔ)上用英語表達(dá)自己的觀點，給讀者傳遞一種正能量。寫作時，從"如何面對失敗"這一話題入手，結(jié)合親身經(jīng)歷談?wù)撌∈遣豢杀苊獾?，正確地面對失敗要做到有積極的態(tài)度并且要從失敗中汲取教訓(xùn)。人稱為第一人稱，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。 　　

寫作素材

1.避免犯錯誤 avoid making mistakes

2.擺脫失敗get rid of failure 3.保持樂觀remain optimistic

4.面對失敗 in the face of failure

5.鼓起勇氣take courage

6.向某人求助turn to sb. for help

7.永不言敗 never say die

8.不出差錯難成功。He who makes no mistakes makes nothing.

9.不經(jīng)歷風(fēng)雨，怎么見彩虹。No cross， no crown.

Writing 3

請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

We all know that "sticks and stones may break our bones", but we should also be aware that words can hurt people, too.

注意：

1.無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語；

2.除詩歌外，文體不限；

3.文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

4.詞數(shù)100左右。

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【參考范文】

My deskmate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his compliments.

One day, when we learned the new word "eccentric" in class, we were asked to make a sentence with it. I volunteered to do it by saying "My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him."Hearing this, the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmate’s face turned red. After class, I learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school if he hadn’t been helped by others. My words must have hurt him deeply.

Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways. We should avoid hurting others when we speak.

Writing 4

近年來，名校受到越來越多的家長和學(xué)生的推崇。請你結(jié)合這個現(xiàn)象寫一篇英語短文，分析出現(xiàn)

＂名校熱＂的原因，并針對這個現(xiàn)象談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>

注意：詞數(shù)100左右。

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【參考范文】

In recent years, more and more parents want to send their children to famous schools because they think it can ensure that their children go to famous universities.

It is true that famous schools are equipped with better teaching facilities. However, not every student is fit for famous schools where there is fierce competition among students. And students there have to work much harder than students in other schools.

I hope the government will take effective measures to make sure all the schools provide equally good education. In this way, all the students have equal right to high-quality education.

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Writing?5

為響應(yīng)“中國夢——我的夢”，彰顯高中生的青春與活力，近期JGEXB(井岡英語學(xué)報)發(fā)布了一則征文，體裁為演講稿。征文題目為“I believe I can”。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)：100左右；

2.格式已給出；

3. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,

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【參考范文】

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,

Please answer me a question, “Have you ever seen such a scene as the following?” In the morning, when you wake up, open your eyes slowly, look around, you can notice that the light comes into your room and smell the fresh air, you can hear the sweet nature voice outside the windows.

Yes, yes, yes, what a beautiful day, what a different day, and what a bright day! And most importantly, it is a new journey of your life, a new beginning to make new decisions, take new actions, make new friends, and take your life to a totally new world!

In your eyes, you can see clearly the things you want to have, the paces you intend to go, the relationship you desire to develop, and the positions you aspire to reach. You are the only one; I am the only one, too. We are all special and different. Life will be senseless if there is no person.

I?am myself, so I believe I can! I know every dream will come true if I'm passionate, confident and hard-working! I will live every day of my life with absolute passion, and now I am showing my passion with words and the actions. I will focus all my time and effort on the most important goals of my life. I will accept challenges of hardship. I will never waver in my pursuit of excellence.

In a word, I believe I am the best one, I can do it and I will realize my dream!

I must do it! I can do it! I will do it! I will succeed! I believe I can.

That's all, thank you！

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