考點(diǎn)59 書面表達(dá)感謝信

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模板一

Dear ________(對象),?

I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感謝的原因).?If it had not been for your assistance in________________________________(對方給你的具體幫助), I fear that I would have been________________________________(沒有對方幫助會產(chǎn)生的后果).

Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(給出細(xì)節(jié)).?Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

模板二

Dear ______,

?????How about your life/ study/ work? I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感謝的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(對方給你的具體幫助), I fear that I would have been_____ (沒有對方幫助時的后果).

????During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s more, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因)

???Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致謝)

Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿) ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Yours sincerely ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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??????感謝信是用于致謝他人的饋贈、款待、幫助、以及對慰問信和祝賀信的回復(fù)。信件不適宜過長，只需寫明感謝他人的理由，信文要感情真摯，措辭得體。

感謝信一般分為三個部分：

第一段：表達(dá)感謝之情并說明原因；

第二段：細(xì)述并贊賞對方給與的幫助；

第三段：再次闡述謝意并表達(dá)回報愿望。

感謝信的寫作指導(dǎo)

1.有序組織要點(diǎn)

??首先，應(yīng)當(dāng)友善地對對方的生活表示關(guān)心；其次，應(yīng)明確陳述寫信的目的,即致謝；然后，應(yīng)肯定對方的幫助恰當(dāng)好處；最后，應(yīng)對對方給予的幫助再次表示感謝并表示良好的祝愿。

2.靈活把握時態(tài)

??感謝信的正文中的時態(tài)靈活多變。通常，在提到對方曾經(jīng)所給予的幫助時，應(yīng)用過去時態(tài)；在提到對方的幫助所產(chǎn)生的實(shí)際效果時，可以使用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)；在涉及到現(xiàn)狀時，應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時；在表達(dá)祝愿或希望時，使用一般將來時態(tài)。

3.運(yùn)用規(guī)范的語言

??感謝信有其自身的特色語言，在行文的每一個環(huán)節(jié)也有一些常用句型。另外表示從對方的幫助中獲益時，可以從多種句型表達(dá)，要讓句式靈活多樣，這樣更能增強(qiáng)表達(dá)效果。

4.表達(dá)感激之情

感謝信的主要目的在于向?qū)Ψ街轮x，因此語言要誠摯，友善；在信的開頭和結(jié)尾部分一般會使用Thank you very much for your kindness and deep concern或 Thanks again and wish you all the best之類的語言表達(dá)感激之情。

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第一段：表達(dá)感謝之情并說明原因；

常用句式

I am writing this letter to thank you for …

I am writing to express my sincere thanks for...

I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt(adj. 衷心的) thanks to you for…

With deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express…

I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for …

I am obliged(adj.感激的) to you for/I owe you a great deal for ...…

I haven't seen you for a long time since we parted last time and I miss you very much. Thank you very much for...

第二段：細(xì)述并贊賞對方給與的幫助；

常用句式

It was nice/kind/thoughtful (adj. 考慮周到的) of you to..

Thank you very much for your kind hospitality (n. 好客, 熱情招待) and the honor you showed me during my visit…

It was your kind help that … (強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)

If it had not been for your (help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldn’t have (won the prize)(虛擬語氣)

=But for/Without your help, I wouldn't have done…

第三段：再次闡述謝意并表達(dá)回報愿望。

常用句式

Thanks again for your generous help.

I appreciate it more than I can say.

My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description.

I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.

Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.

Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.

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題組一?

Writing 1（2019年浙江卷）

第一節(jié) ?應(yīng)用文寫作(滿分15分)

假定你是李華，經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國家。請給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括:

1.表示感謝；

2.回顧Alex對你的幫助；

3.臨別祝愿。

注意:

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Writing 2

假定你是李華，你校外教Marry回美國度假即將返回，給你發(fā)來e-mail，詢問是否需要她幫你從美國買些禮物。請給她回復(fù)—封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 詢問度假情況；

2. 表達(dá)感謝；

3. 希望買一本英語詞典和幾本美國暢銷小說。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Marry,

I am so glad to know that you are returning to China after the holidays in the USA.

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

Writing3

假定你是李華，在感恩節(jié)來臨之際，請你給任教期滿已回國的外教Peter寫一封感謝信。要點(diǎn)如下：

1.老師在學(xué)習(xí)和生活上對你的幫助；

2.表達(dá)感激之情及祝愿。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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題組二（名校模擬題）

Writing?1（2020屆安徽高三開學(xué)考試）

假設(shè)你是高三學(xué)生李華,你需要設(shè)計(jì)一份英語俱樂部招收新成員的海報。你想請外籍教帥 Mr. Brown幫助策劃。請根據(jù)提示,用英語給Mr. Brown寫一封電子郵件,向他尋求幫助,要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 設(shè)計(jì)海報的目的；

2. 為何要求助 ???請Mr. Brown幫助設(shè)計(jì)海報；

3. 為何希望得到他的指導(dǎo)—— Mr. Brown按長設(shè)計(jì)海報,并且有這方面的經(jīng)驗(yàn)；

4. 感謝他的幫助。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右; ???

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Writing?2（2020屆四川省南充高級中學(xué)高三月考）

假如你叫李華，今年暑假即將跨入高三的學(xué)習(xí)，壓力很大，想和父母說說心里話，請你用英文在你的博客上以書信形式表達(dá)出來。

主要內(nèi)容如下：

1. 感謝父母的關(guān)心、鼓勵；

2. 對父母的期望；

3. 學(xué)習(xí)打算。

注意：

1. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2. 詞數(shù)：100左右（開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。

Dear Mom and Dad,

With the Senior Three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!

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Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Writing?3（2020屆廣東佛山一中高三月考）

假定你是育才中學(xué)的學(xué)生會主席李華，受美國亞特蘭大ELCA高中(Eagle’s Landing Christian Academy) 學(xué)生會主席Peter邀請，計(jì)劃下個月帶領(lǐng)10位學(xué)生會成員赴該校進(jìn)行為期一周的交流，請你給對方寫一封郵件咨詢相關(guān)準(zhǔn)備工作。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 感謝對方的邀請；

2. 詢問相關(guān)事宜（最佳到達(dá)時間、具體日程安排、需要攜帶的物品）;

3. 期盼盡早得到答復(fù)。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭已給出。

Dear Peter,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

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題組一?

Writing 1

【寫作指導(dǎo)】?

這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能選漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)，寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次.特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化.平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【范文】?

Dear Chris,

I am so regretful to know that you are going to return to your home before long.?We get along well during your stay in China and you offered me lots of help.?I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with my English.?While studying in China,?you always spent your free time in helping me polish up my oral English.?It is you who shared me with rich knowledge of English and English culture.?Never will I forget you and your kindness.?It is my hope that you can remember me as often as possible.?

Yours,

Li Hua

Writing 2

【參考范文】

Dear Mary,

I am so glad to know that you are returning to China after the holidays in the USA. How is your holiday? You must have had great fun together with your family back in your motherland after working so long in China. I hope you can share your wonderful experience with us afterwards.

It is very kind of you to offer to buy gifts for me. I would quite appreciate it if you could buy me an English dictionary and several popular novels which/that sell well in your country. I am sure they will help improve my English. I will also prepare a gift for you in return.

Thanks again for your kindness.?We are all looking forward to seeing you soon. Welcome back to our school!

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

Writing3

Dear Peter,

Thanksgiving is drawing near! I am writing to express my thanks to you.

Without your help, I would not have achieved much in learning English last year. Moreover, you offered so much encouragement while I was in low spirits. Thanks to your help, I became more confident and spent more time reading English books. The efforts have paid off and now English is my favorite subject. Thank you for entering my world and I will always remember what you have done for me.

Wish you all the best.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

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題組二?

Writing1

【范文】

Dear Mr Brown,

I’m writing to ask you for help in the hope that you will be kind to help me.

To enrich our school life and improve our English level, every year we hold an activity, appealing to new members to join our English club. For a long time, I have been longing to organize English clubs and throw English parties if possible. What I should do is put up attractive posters.

I’ve heard you are expert at designing posters and have some experience in the field, so I’d like you to help create a poster. If you agree, I will come to your house at the time most convenient to you.

I’d be grateful if you’d like to give me a hand. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Writing?2

【范文】

Dear Mom and Dad,

With the Senior Three approaching, I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!

During the years, I always feel grateful for your unselfish care and love. Thanks to your constant encouragement, I have been making remarkable progress in my studies. Since it will be less than one month before the exam, I’m under great pressure now. I would appreciate it if you could have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help, which contribute to my staying in a good state. I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering. I have made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” Meanwhile, I will spare some time to participate in sports activities, aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies.

Mom and Dad, I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

?Writing?3

【范文】

Dear Peter,

I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School. Thank you so much for inviting us to have a one-week communication activity at your school and I am writing to enquire about further details.

I am planning to take 10 members of our Student Union to go to your school next month, hoping to make good use of this opportunity to communicate and learn from each other. So I’d like to know what the best date of our arrival is. Above all, could you possibly send me a specific daily schedule of the activity in advance so that I can prepare better for the trip? Last but not least, this being our first experience to go to America, would you be kind enough to offer some suggestions on what necessities we specially need to take with us?

We are really excited and looking forward to the activity. I would appreciate it if you could give me a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

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