考點(diǎn)58 書面表達(dá)邀請(qǐng)信
高考頻度：★★★★★
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模板①
Dear________,
???________(開門見山地點(diǎn)、活動(dòng))，It would be pleasant to have you here(表達(dá)邀請(qǐng)?jiān)竿?/span>). Will you give me the pleasure of your company(正式發(fā)出邀請(qǐng))？
During the party/conference, we will have a lots of activities you will be interested in (開始介紹活動(dòng)內(nèi)容). First, __________(介紹舉行的活動(dòng)一). Second, _________(介紹舉行的活動(dòng)二). I know/believe you be very interested in _________(引出受邀請(qǐng)人參加的理由). First/For one thing________(希望受邀人參加的理由一)，Second/For another__________(希望受邀人參加的理由二)。 The party/conference would not be complete without you(總結(jié)受邀人參加的必要性).
The party/conference will begin at ________(提出活動(dòng)的地點(diǎn)). It is possible for us to meet at ________(提出具體約定時(shí)間). We do hope you can come ________(再次發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)).
Yours
Li Hua
模板②
Dear________,
There will be a________(內(nèi)容) at/in________(地點(diǎn)) on________(時(shí)間). We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at________________(具體時(shí)間). This will be followed by a________(進(jìn)一步的安排). At ________________(時(shí)間), we will have ________________________(另一個(gè)安排).
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before_________________________(通知你的最后期限).
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
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?【篇首句】介紹自己，簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明活動(dòng)，并邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方。
1. I’m Wang Ming from YuWen School，the president of the Student Union.
我是來(lái)自育文學(xué)校的王明，學(xué)生會(huì)主席。
2. An English speaking contest of our school will be held on August 6.
我們學(xué)校有一場(chǎng)英語(yǔ)演講比賽將在8月6號(hào)舉行。學(xué)科&網(wǎng)
3. There will be a party in my garden on Sunday.
周日，在我的花園里會(huì)舉行一場(chǎng)聚會(huì)。
4. I’d like to invite you to judge it.
我想邀請(qǐng)你做它的裁判。
5. I’m writing to invite you to...
我寫信是邀請(qǐng)你……
6. I wonder if you can come to...
我想知道你是否能來(lái)……
7. We sincerely hope you can attend it.
我們真誠(chéng)希望你能夠參加。
8. It’s my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to...
我很榮幸的邀請(qǐng)你……
9. It’s a pity that you have to go back to America soon. So a farewell party for you will be held in the Sun Club this Saturday evening. Could you come at 6:00 pm?
很遺憾你不久就要回美國(guó)了。所以，這周六，在陽(yáng)光俱樂(lè)部我們會(huì)為你舉行一個(gè)歡送會(huì)。下午六點(diǎn)你能來(lái)嗎？
【篇中句】介紹活動(dòng)具體內(nèi)容，并說(shuō)明受邀人參加理由。
1. It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches.
它將于下午兩點(diǎn)鐘開始，四點(diǎn)鐘結(jié)束，在此期間將會(huì)有十五位準(zhǔn)備充分的參賽者發(fā)表演講。
2. We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00.
我們將會(huì)在上午八點(diǎn)出發(fā)，九點(diǎn)到達(dá)那里。
3. During the afternoon, we’ll...together.
下午，我們會(huì)一起……
4. Remember to take water and lunch with you.
記得帶上水和午餐。
5. By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 in front of your apartment and it will take you directly to the club.
順便說(shuō)一下，你可以乘坐你家公寓前的322路公交車，它會(huì)直接把你帶到俱樂(lè)部。
6. I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest.
我知道你的母語(yǔ)是英語(yǔ)，還是一個(gè)英語(yǔ)老師。我，代表我們學(xué)校，真誠(chéng)的邀請(qǐng)你來(lái)比賽現(xiàn)場(chǎng)。
7. Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance.
既然你如此渴望提高英語(yǔ)，這會(huì)是一個(gè)很好的機(jī)會(huì)。
8. I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there.
我保證你在那里會(huì)過(guò)得很愉快。
【篇尾句】期待對(duì)方接受邀請(qǐng)，并期待對(duì)方盡快回復(fù)。
1. Will you be available during that time? Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience.
那期間你有空嗎？請(qǐng)方便時(shí)盡快給我打電話1234567。
2. Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation?
請(qǐng)盡快告訴我你能否接受我的邀請(qǐng)好嗎？
3. We will feel much honored if you could come.如果你能來(lái)，我們會(huì)非常榮幸。
4. We are looking forward to your coming.我們期待著你的到來(lái)。
5. I am longing to see you soon.我期待著盡早見到你。
【寫作思路】
【寫作注意事項(xiàng)】
a. 盛情邀請(qǐng)參加聚會(huì)、共度假期或游覽某地等；
b. 建立密切聯(lián)系，加強(qiáng)感情交流；
c. 拓展相關(guān)內(nèi)容，激發(fā)他人興趣。
【寫作方法】
①?首段：開門見山說(shuō)明寫作目的。
②?主體：
a. 具體交代邀請(qǐng)?jiān)颍?/span>
b. 邀請(qǐng)內(nèi)容：活動(dòng)性質(zhì)、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、日期；
c. 有關(guān)要求和希望。
③?尾段：
a. 再次盛情邀請(qǐng)；
b. 希望盡快答復(fù)。
【寫作流程圖】
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說(shuō)明活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、對(duì)象等
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題組一（高考真題）
Writing 1 (2019年新課標(biāo)全國(guó)卷III)
假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂(lè)節(jié)。請(qǐng)寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)你的英國(guó)朋友Allen參加，內(nèi)容包括：
1.時(shí)間；
2.活動(dòng)安排；
3.歡迎他表演節(jié)目。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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【試題趨勢(shì)】
跟去年類似，今年的書面表達(dá)要求考生寫郵件，告知英國(guó)朋友音樂(lè)節(jié)的情況 (屬音樂(lè)活動(dòng)范疇)。近年來(lái)，書面表達(dá)的考查越來(lái)越貼近中學(xué)生的日常生活，更加重視語(yǔ)言的應(yīng)用，回歸了英語(yǔ)作為語(yǔ)言功能的本質(zhì)。因此，在備考時(shí)，要集中看一些與日常生活和學(xué)習(xí)息息相關(guān)的話題，如學(xué)校生活、體育運(yùn)動(dòng)、語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)、節(jié)假日及活動(dòng)等，并密切關(guān)注社會(huì)時(shí)事，按照話題網(wǎng)絡(luò)化復(fù)習(xí)，效果會(huì)更佳。
【寫作指導(dǎo)】
今年的書面表達(dá)要求考生寫郵件，告知英國(guó)朋友音樂(lè)節(jié)的情況。
【詳解】首先確定提綱。先介紹寫作目的，之后介紹音樂(lè)節(jié)的時(shí)間、活動(dòng)安排等具體信息，最后歡迎他表演節(jié)目。
第二，根據(jù)提綱，確定關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)，如：How is everything going? a music festival，in the school hall，The opening ceremony等。
第三，注意選用合適的連接詞將各要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)。
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Writing?2(2018·天津卷)
假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的機(jī)器人興趣小組組長(zhǎng)李津，你的美國(guó)朋友Chris就讀于天津某國(guó)際學(xué)校，他曾在機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽中獲獎(jiǎng)。你打算邀請(qǐng)他加入你的團(tuán)隊(duì)，參加即將于7月底在天津舉行的世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示代表興趣小組給他寫一封電子郵件。
（1）比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；
（2）邀請(qǐng)他的原因；
（3）訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃將發(fā)送其郵箱，請(qǐng)他提出建議。
注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；
（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：
世界青少年機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽?the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. ______________________________________________________________
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
Writing?3(2017·新課標(biāo)卷II)
假定你是李華，想邀請(qǐng)外教Henry一起參觀中國(guó)剪紙（paper-cutting）藝術(shù)展。請(qǐng)給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1.展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；
2.展覽內(nèi)容。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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Writing?4(2017·新課標(biāo)卷III)
假定你是李華。你所在的校乒乓球隊(duì)正在招收新隊(duì)員。請(qǐng)給你的留學(xué)生朋友Eric寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他加入，內(nèi)容包括：
1.球隊(duì)活動(dòng)；
2.報(bào)名方式及截止日期。
注意：
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詞數(shù)100左右；
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可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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Writing?5(2016·新課標(biāo)卷II)
假定你是李華，你校攝影俱樂(lè)部（photography club）將舉辦國(guó)際中學(xué)攝影展。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Peter寫封信，請(qǐng)他提供作品。信的內(nèi)容包括：
???1.主題：環(huán)境保護(hù)；
???2.展覽時(shí)間；
???3.投稿郵箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
注意：
???1.詞數(shù)100左右；
???2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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題組二（名校模擬題）
Writing 1（山西省晉城市2018-2019學(xué)年高三第三次模擬考試）
假定你是李華,你的英國(guó)好友Felix來(lái)信說(shuō)他對(duì)中國(guó)古代名人很感興趣,請(qǐng)你就此給他回一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1.簡(jiǎn)要介紹你最喜歡的古代名人；
2.你喜歡他/她的理由;
3.邀請(qǐng)Felix來(lái)華感受中華文化。
注意1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，,以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯:名人 celebrity
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Writing?2（2019年廣東省化州市高考模擬）
假定你是李華，你的朋友Peter想了解你校于十二月舉辦的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化藝術(shù)節(jié)。請(qǐng)你給Peter寫封回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1.舉辦藝術(shù)節(jié)的目的；
2.介紹你最喜歡的一個(gè)藝術(shù)節(jié)活動(dòng)；
3.邀請(qǐng)Peter參加并告之藝術(shù)節(jié)活動(dòng)的時(shí)間。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
3.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Peter,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing?3（2019年安徽省合肥市高三第三次質(zhì)量檢測(cè)）
假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Peter正在你們學(xué)校開展為期兩周的交流活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你給他寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他一起去郊游，欣賞中國(guó)美麗鄉(xiāng)村。內(nèi)容包括：
1.時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；
2.特色鄉(xiāng)村文化體驗(yàn)（如賞美景、看演出、品美食等）
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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Writing?4（2019年湖南省師范大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)高三考前演練）
假定你是李華，去年暑假你在英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)期間住在當(dāng)?shù)氐囊粋€(gè)寄宿家庭，并與該家庭的同齡人David結(jié)為好友。你想邀請(qǐng)他今年暑假來(lái)中國(guó)，請(qǐng)就此事給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：
1.對(duì)David一家給你的照顧再次表示感謝；
2.你的邀請(qǐng)；
3.你為David安排的一些活動(dòng)。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
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題組一?
Writing?1
【參考范文】
Dear Allen,
How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.
The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Writing?2
【思路點(diǎn)撥】
本篇書面要求寫一封邀請(qǐng)信。寫作的時(shí)候要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：一、動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：1. 代表興趣小組發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)；2. 介紹比賽的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等安排；3. 說(shuō)明邀請(qǐng)他的原因，包括Chris曾在機(jī)器人技能競(jìng)賽中獲獎(jiǎng)；4. 告訴他訓(xùn)練計(jì)劃將發(fā)送其郵箱，請(qǐng)他提出建議。二、寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，對(duì)于本文來(lái)說(shuō)，以一般將來(lái)時(shí)為主，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【滿分范文】
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.?
With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
Writing?3?
【思路分析】
題目要求寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)外教參觀中國(guó)剪紙藝術(shù)展。寫作情境設(shè)置真實(shí)，任務(wù)要求符合學(xué)生能力水平，自然地融入了我國(guó)優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化(剪紙paper-cutting)的內(nèi)容，能夠引導(dǎo)學(xué)生在使用外語(yǔ)了解世界的同時(shí)，注重傳承發(fā)揚(yáng)中華民族優(yōu)秀文明成果，運(yùn)用中國(guó)元素講中國(guó)故事，增強(qiáng)文化自信。該寫作貼近學(xué)生生活，學(xué)生有話可說(shuō)?？忌晌臅r(shí)應(yīng)注意：1. 結(jié)構(gòu)采用三段成文：第一段自我介紹并引出話題；第二段具體交代活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；第三段較為詳細(xì)地交代展覽內(nèi)容。2. 時(shí)態(tài)：以一般將來(lái)時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。3. 人稱：第一人稱。4. 注意恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使文章自然、流暢。5. 適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯和句型以提高作文檔次。
【范文賞析】
Dear Henry，
I’m Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know you’re interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms?—?paper-cutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
It’ll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you at 2：00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like.
You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which paper-cutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of paper-cuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Regards,
Li Hua
Writing?4
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Dear Eric,
I am Li Hua. I am writing to invite you to join the table tennis team in our school. It is known that we can benefit a lot from playing table tennis. It can prevent us from getting shortsighted and it can keep us physically healthy. As to the activities, we plan to invite experienced players to giving training to us every Friday afternoon. At the same time, we will divide the members into several groups to practice at 5:00pm after school.
If you are interested, sign up on our school website before August 10.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing?5
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本文要求考生以李華的身份給英國(guó)朋友Peter寫信，建議他參加你校攝影俱樂(lè)部舉辦的國(guó)際中學(xué)生攝影展。文章要使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主的時(shí)態(tài)。要點(diǎn)：1. 校攝影俱樂(lè)部舉辦的國(guó)際中學(xué)生攝影展，主題為環(huán)境保護(hù)；2.展覽時(shí)間6月15日，持續(xù)三周；3.知道對(duì)方對(duì)攝影很感興趣，也恰好有環(huán)保方面的圖片，希望對(duì)方能夠參加本次展覽。4.投稿郵箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com。在寫作時(shí)，注意書信的格式以及過(guò)渡用語(yǔ)的正確使用；同時(shí)盡量使用熟悉的詞匯及短語(yǔ)，尤其注意不要出現(xiàn)中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)，恰當(dāng)使用一些復(fù)合句或者諺語(yǔ)以增加獲得高分的可能性。學(xué)@科網(wǎng)
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Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th?and last for three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gm.school.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
題組二?
Writing 1
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Dear Felix
I’m very glad to know that you're quite interested in ancient Chinese celebrities.Let me share with you the ancient Chinese celebrity I like best.
Of all the ancient Chinese celebrities, Du Fu, a famous poet of the Tang Dynasty, is my favorite.The reason is that his greatest ambition was to serve his country as a successful civil servant.What's more, he's considered as the greatest of the Chinese poets along with Li Bai.Nearly 1,500 poems of his have been preserved over the ages.I sincerely hope that you can come to China to experience Chinese culture in person when it is convenient for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2
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Dear Peter，
Having known that you are interested in our school art festival about traditional Chinese culture, I am writing to offer you some detailed information.
This art festival falls in every December at our campus, aiming to enrich our school life and arouse our awareness of carrying forward the precious traditional Chinese culture.
Sponsored by our Students’ Union, the festival covers a wide variety of activities, among which I pay special attention to the Chinese poetry competition, since I hold the belief that one filled with knowledge always behaves with elegance. Poem lovers read, recite seas of poems that they love and exchange their perspectives on poetry.
Why not come and enjoy the strong atmosphere of our festival at the very beginning of December? Your involvement will be warmly welcomed.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 3
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Dear Peter,
????I am very glad to hear that you come to our school for a two-week exchange activity. Coincidentally, our class is going to have an outing in the suburbs next Friday. I’m writing to invite you to join us. Our destination is Guangming Village, which is 5 miles away from their school. It is a place where we can experience a variety of country culture, such as enjoying the beautiful scenery, watching the performances and tasting delicious food. I am sure that we will have a good time there and it is sure to give you an unforgettable memory. We will gather at 8;00 a.m. at our school gate next Friday. If you want to go with us, please be sure to arrive on time.
??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Yours,
Li?Hua
Writing?4
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Dear David,
With the summer holidays approaching, I can't help thinking of the days when I was taken good care of in your family last summer. Let me express my thanks again to you and your family.
Now I'm writing to invite you to come to China this summer, if it is convenient for you. I plan to accompany you on trips to some places of interest, such as the Great Wall, where you will see why it is called one of the greatest wonders of the world. We can also spend some days staying in a village so that we can experience the real life of local people. What do you think of it?
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.
Yours,
Li Hua
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