1. 體裁解讀
日記常用來記述一天中所發(fā)生的重要的或有趣的事情，也可以用來敘述自己當(dāng)天觸景而發(fā)的感受等。日記的主要體裁通常是記敘文或簡(jiǎn)單的議論文。
2. 寫作攻略
英文日記通常由書端和正文兩部分組成。書端是專門記載寫日記的日期及天氣狀況的。正文的格式與其他文章相近，一般縮進(jìn)4個(gè)字母，也可以頂格寫。由于日記所寫的事件都是發(fā)生過的事情，所以日記通常用一般過去時(shí)。因?yàn)槿沼浂酁橛洈⒆约旱挠H身經(jīng)歷或抒發(fā)自己的感想，所以一般用第一人稱。
寫日記的時(shí)候一般遵循以下步驟：
第一步：介紹事件：
第二步：具體闡述事情經(jīng)過，補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)；
第三步：表達(dá)感想或總結(jié)該事件的意義。
寫日記要注意以下幾點(diǎn)： ?
1. 日記的第一行要寫清日期、星期和天氣狀況。日期和星期寫在正文的左上角，月份與星期可以縮寫。天氣狀況寫在正文的右上角。如果是游記，還可以寫明地點(diǎn)。 ?
2. 日記通常使用過去時(shí)記錄所發(fā)生的事件。若為議論、抒情或描述景物和人，為了生動(dòng)，也可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。 ?
3. 日記的正文可以是敘事、描寫、說明或議論等形式，且通常用第一人稱。 ?
4. 日記雖然是記錄事件，但應(yīng)該適當(dāng)加一些個(gè)人感悟，寫出亮點(diǎn)。
我們以【2018年四川成都市】為例：
?假如你是圖中女孩，你與家人于4月29日共度周日。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖中所示寫一篇英文日記，講述你當(dāng)天所見和所做之事。
注意：1.日記應(yīng)包含圖中所有信息
2.日記中須寫出當(dāng)天的一些感受
3.日記應(yīng)格式正確,語(yǔ)句通順,句式多樣
4詞數(shù):100左右。
參考詞匯:城堡?castle螃蟹crab
【答案】Sunny Sunday,
April 29(th)
Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach It was so fine that I could see the rising sun and flying sea birds. a boat sailed itself in the distance. What a beautiful scene! Dressed in swimming suit, I swam in the blue and clear sea. Then, I played volleyball with my parents. Finally, I managed to make a sand castle with tools. It looked so true to life that a crab even wanted to live in it.
What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but also shared happiness with my family.
寫作模板
Day of the week???Date ??????????????????????????????????????Weather
Today is ___________. I did some meaningful things ___________.
In the morning, I ___________（事件一）. In the afternoon, I ___________（事件二）. After that, I ___________（事件三）.
What a warm and meaningful day!?I will?never forget the memorable day! / Although I was very tired,?I felt very happy because?___________.
【模板范文】
Sunday???May 10th??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????Fine
Today is?Mother's Day.?I did some meaningful things?to?show my love to my mother.
In the morning,?I bought my mother some flowers with my pocket money.?In the afternoon,?I?went shopping and then cooked?a delicious dinner for my family.?After that,?I?gave mother the?card made by myself and said "Happy Mother's Day"?to her.?I told?her I would study hard and never let her down.?Hearing this,?my?mother was moved to tears.
What a warm and meaningful day! I will?never forget?the memorable day!
亮點(diǎn)詞匯搭配
1. 表示天氣
fine adj.?晴朗的 cloudy adj.?多云的
snowy adj.下雪的 rainy adj. 下雨的
windy adj.?有風(fēng)的 hail n.?冰雹
2. 抒發(fā)感想
moved adj.?感動(dòng)的 enjoy oneself 玩得高興
memorable adj.?值得紀(jì)念的 meaningful adj.?有意義的
worry about 擔(dān)憂 delicious adj.?美味的
3. 其他
finish v.?完成 classmate n.?同學(xué)
voluntary adj.?志愿的，義務(wù)的 although conj.?雖然
經(jīng)典句子背誦：
開頭句 ?
1. It was a fine/nice day. 天氣晴朗。
2. Today is... 今天是……
3. I went to the park to... 我去公園……
4.?We decided to go out for a picnic today.
??我們決定今天出去野餐。
5.?My classmates and I went to the park to do some?voluntary work.
??我和我們班的同學(xué)去公園做義務(wù)勞動(dòng)。
中間句 ?
1.?First we were divided into three groups and then began?working.
??我們首先分成了三個(gè)組，然后開始工作。
2.?The task for Group Two was collecting the litter and?cleaning benches.
??第二組的同學(xué)收集垃圾和清理長(zhǎng)凳。
3.?Group Three wiped all the equipment in the park.
??第三組的同學(xué)擦洗公園里所有的設(shè)施。
結(jié)尾句 ?
1. I had a good time today. / I enjoyed myself today.
??我今天玩得很高興。
2. I will never forget it. 我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記這件事。
3.?What a warm and meaningful day!
??這是多么溫馨而又富有意義的一天！
4.?I will never forget the memorable day!
??我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記這難忘的一天！
5.?Although everyone was very tired,?we felt very happy?because we had done a meaningful job.
??雖然大家都很累，但我們很開心，因?yàn)槲覀冏隽艘患幸饬x的工作。
（一）
【2018年浙江寧波市中考】今年5月11日，你校組織了一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，部分學(xué)生選擇去了紅星農(nóng)場(chǎng)（見導(dǎo)圖一），其余學(xué)生選擇去了科技博物館（見導(dǎo)圖二）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你所選擇的實(shí)踐活動(dòng)寫一篇英語(yǔ)日記，記錄當(dāng)天的經(jīng)歷和感受。
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????導(dǎo)圖一????????????????????????????????????????????導(dǎo)圖二
注意：(1)日記必須包括你所選擇導(dǎo)圖的所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；
(3)詞數(shù)：80 -100。日記格式及首句己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Friday, May 11th
Today I had a school trip.??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????___
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________?
【滿分作文一】
Friday. May 11th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to Hongxing Farm by bus early in the morning.
The minute we arrived, we took a walk around the farm. Then we fed the chickens. When I threw some food to them, they ran over to me with excitement and some of them even walked into their friends. The most exciting thing was that we picked strawberries after lunch. While we were picking, we ate a lot. How sweet they were!
I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again in the near future!
(98 words)
【滿分作文二】
Friday, May 11th
Today I had a school trip. The weather was fine. My classmates and I set off to the Science Museum by subway at 7 :00.
As soon as we reached the museum, we were amazed to see lots of pictures about science. Then we watched a video about different inventions and their inventors. It's unbelievable that technology has progressed in such a rapid way. In the afternoon, we played chess with some special robots. It was surprising to find that nobody could beat them. Before leaving, we bought some gifts for our friends.
I had a wonderful time today! I do hope to go there again!
（99 words）
體即可。
（二）
【2018年湖北省孝感】本周一是端午節(jié)，你校外教Tony對(duì)中國(guó)文化很感興趣，你陪他去槐蔭公園觀看了龍舟比賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇日記。
寫作要點(diǎn)：
1.現(xiàn)場(chǎng)情況。人多擁擠，16支龍舟隊(duì)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激烈，人們歡呼，隊(duì)員們閉隊(duì)合作，最終“勇氣隊(duì)”獲勝。
2.賽后活動(dòng)：我給Tony介紹端午節(jié)，下午帶他參加有關(guān)端午節(jié)的其它活動(dòng)，如……
3.感想：Tony……，我……
寫作要求：
1.短文內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)句通順，條理清晰；
2.省略號(hào)處須作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮(1-2句即可)；
3.100詞左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
June 18th
Today is the Dragon Boat Festival.?????????????????????????????????????????????????????_____
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【滿分作文】
Today is the Dragon Boat Festival For the reason that Tony has a strong interest in Chinese traditional culture. I invited him to come to watch the dragon boat races which was held in Huaiyin Park this morning When we arrived, it was crowded. There were 16 colorful dragon boats floating in the river. During the race, the dragon boat teams competed with each other, while people on each bank cheered up. Both Tony and I felt the exciting atmosphere. At last, the Courage Team won.
After the competition, I introduced the Dragon Boat Festival to Tony and welcomed him to many other activities about the festival. We went to learn how to make zongzi and admire a picture exhibition.
At the end of the day, tired as we were, we felt excited. Tony though our traditional Chinese culture was so amazing and I am proud of my great motherland.
寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練、要點(diǎn)齊全。文中invite sb.to do, during the race, compete with, cheere up, at last, both…and…; at the end of the day, be proud of等詞匯的恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；本文還采用了豐富的句型，比如：運(yùn)用了there be句型；定語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。
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