
1. 體裁解讀
申請信是在求職或留學(xué)時常用的一種信件。申請信應(yīng)該簡潔明了,如實地反映你的才能、成績、愿望和目標(biāo)。一封英文申請信必須表明寫信的目的,原因以及對自身情況的介紹。申請信的語氣要誠摯、友好,在表達(dá)自己的愿望時應(yīng)禮貌而自信。
2. 寫作攻略
申請信要求一事一議,內(nèi)容單純。其內(nèi)容一般包括:申請的具體內(nèi)容;自己的情況和條件;提出要求,如請求回信、面試等。申請信的書寫可以遵照以下步驟:
第一步:點名寫信目的,說明信息來源,并陳述自己能勝任;
第二步:介紹自己,具體說明能勝任的原因;
第三步:表達(dá)期望,請求盡快答復(fù)并給予機會。
我們以【2018年浙江省舟山市】中考書面表達(dá)為例:
假設(shè)你是李華。上周六,你陪同來自美國結(jié)對學(xué)校的中學(xué)生Peter體驗中國文化。請根據(jù)以下信息,用英語寫一篇短文向???/span>English Journey投稿,介紹本次活動內(nèi)容并分享感受。
Activities
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Feelings
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◆make zongzi
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…
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◆visit a tea museum
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◆learn Chinese characters
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注意:(1)短文必須包括表格中的所有內(nèi)容,并表達(dá)感受。
(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)與你身份相關(guān)的信息。
(3)詞數(shù):80-100。短文首句僅供參考,不計入總詞數(shù)。
短文首句:Last Saturday, I took Peter, a student from America, to experience some Chinese cultures.
【答案】Last Saturday, I took Peter, a student from America, to experience some Chine cultures. Everything he experienced that day is a great attraction to him.
In the morning, Peter and I went to visit a tea museum, where he learnt a lot about Chinese tea. After that, I took him home and taught him to make zongzi. Although it was a bit difficult, he still enjoyed it. In the afternoon, we had a Chinese class, learning the history of Chinese characters. He also tried to write some characters with a Chinese brush, and even lost himself in it.
Peter kept saying “Amazing!” all the way, which makes me really proud of our rich cultures.
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寫作模板
Dear __________,
I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of ______________(工作、職位等). / I write to express my interest in ______________ (工作、職位等). / In reply to your advertisement in ______________ (地),I write the letter.
My name is ______________. One of my reasons for applying is that ______________ (原因一). The other reason is that ______________ (原因二). Besides, ______________(原因三).
I hope you will be kind enough to consider my application.
Best regards for your health and success.
??????????????????Sincerely yours,
????????????????________(落款)
【模板范文】
Dear?Chairman,
I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of?joining?the Chinese and western cultural exchange club.
My name is?Li Hua and I'm 15.?One of my reasons for applying is that?I like English and I am interested in western culture.?The other reason is that?I hope to make some friends in?the club.?Communicating with people is my strength.?Besides, I also want to know more about the difference between Chinese and?western culture.
I hope you will be kind enough to consider my application.
Best regards for your health and success.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
亮點詞匯搭配
1. 表示優(yōu)點和能力
imagination n.?想象力 creativity 創(chuàng)造力
honest adj.?誠實的 strength n.?長處,優(yōu)點
interesting adj.?有趣的 be good at 擅長
major in... 主修…… suitable adj.?適合的
hard-working adj.?勤奮的,努力的
have a good command of 掌握,精通
2. 表示期望
answer n.?& v.?回應(yīng),答復(fù) consider v.?考慮
offer v.?提供 opportunity n.?機會
chance n.?機會 join v.?加入
look forward to期待 application n. 申請
3. 其他
advertisement n.?廣告 possibility n.?可能性
especially adv.?尤其 interview n.?面試
reply n.?& v.?回復(fù),回應(yīng) convenience n.?方便
poster n.?海報 interest n.?興趣
activity n.?活動 favorite?adj.?最喜愛的
post/position n.?職位 volunteer n.?志愿者
in one's spare time 在某人業(yè)余時間
經(jīng)典句子背誦:
開頭句 ?
1.?I write to express my interest in...
??我寫信是為了表達(dá)我對……的興趣。
2.?In reply to your advertisement in...,?I write the letter.
??我寫這封信是為了回應(yīng)您在……廣告。
3. I am writing to tell you that I am suitable for the job yare advertising.
??我寫信是告訴您我符合您招聘廣告中的要求。
4. I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of...
??我寫這封信是想詢問一下能否……
中間句 ?
1.?I?learned from the newspaper that your company needed?a part-time English secretary.
??我從報紙上看到您的公司需要一名兼職英語秘書。
2. I have a good command of... 我……掌握得很好。
3. In my spare time, I read a lot. 我在閑暇時經(jīng)常讀書。
4.?Being good at playing with children,?I can do my best?to help the kids.
??我非常擅長和孩子一起玩,我會盡我最大的努力幫助他們。
5.?In my opinion,?volunteer work is great because it can?help many people.
??我認(rèn)為志愿者的工作很偉大,因為它可以幫助很多人。
6.?I think the job can not only help me improve my English,?but also help me know more about the society.
??我認(rèn)為這份工作不僅能幫我提高英語水平,而且能幫助我更好地了解社會。
結(jié)尾句 ?
1.?I?hope you will?be kind enough to consider my application.
??希望您能考慮我的申請。
2.?I?shall?be much grateful if you will offer me an opportunity to an interview.
??如果您能給我提供一個面試機會,我將不勝感激。
3.?Thank you for considering my application and I am?looking forward to hearing from you.
??感謝您考慮我的申請,期待得到您的回復(fù)。
4.?I hope you'll let me join your volunteer group.
??我希望您能準(zhǔn)許我加入您的志愿者團(tuán)隊。
5. I'm looking forward to your reply. 期待您的回復(fù)。
(一)【2019 ?吉林】
假如你是李華,想?yún)⒓?/span>China Daily 舉辦的以”夢想職業(yè)體驗”為主題的2019年夏令營活動。請給主辦人Mr.?Smith寫一封介紹個人情況的申請郵件。內(nèi)容包括:1.個人信息與興趣愛好2.夢想職業(yè)與個人計劃
寫作要求;1.詞數(shù)90詞左右,開頭結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。
2. ?文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的學(xué)校名稱與姓名。
Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you.?_______________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【寫作思路】
本文屬于申請信,給主辦人史密斯先生寫一封介紹個人情況的申請郵件,包含個人信息與興趣愛好和夢想職業(yè)與個人計劃。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。
【參考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
It's my pleasure to introduce myself to you.
My name is Li Hua.I like reading and writing.I spend lots of time reading in the library with my classmates after school.And I have a habit of keeping a dairy.I want to be a writer when I grow up.So After knowing your summer camp,I feel very excited because it's about dream job experience.If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job,I will cherish this chance.After work,I will spend more time making a summary.
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【名師點評】
這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點詞句,如like doing, spend+時間+doing sth, keep a diary, grow up以及If I have this kind of opportunity to experience my dream job,I will cherish this chance中if引導(dǎo)的條件句用一般現(xiàn)在時,主句用一般將來時,增強邏輯關(guān)系,增加上下文意思連貫,用詞準(zhǔn)確,句子通順,行文連貫。
(二)【2019 ?寧夏回族自治區(qū)】
第四屆“絲綢之路”寧夏國際馬拉松賽將于2020年5月舉行。假定你叫李華,你想成為本屆馬拉松賽的一名志愿者。請用英語給組委會寫一封申請信,內(nèi)容包括:
1.個人優(yōu)勢:擅長英語,性格開朗,做事認(rèn)真,愛好運動。(至少再補充兩點)
2.個人承諾:盡力提供優(yōu)質(zhì)服務(wù)。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)80左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù));
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯:volunteer志愿者
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua.?I'm very glad that the 4h"Silk Road”?International Marathon will be held?in Ningxia in May,2020.?__________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly.
Li Hua
【參考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua.I'm very glad that the 4h "Silk Road" International Marathon will be held in Ningxia in May,2020.I'd like to be a volunteer.
I'm a girl of 15,a middle school student.First of all,I do well in English.【高分句型一】I'm outgoing.I take everything seriously.Besides,I am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before.【高分句型二】What's more,I'm always ready to help others and good at working with people.(個人優(yōu)勢)I promise I'll try to offer my best service during the race.I will be very happy if I can be chosen as a volunteer.(個人承諾)
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【名師點評】
【高分句型一】
First of all,I do well in English.首先,我的英語很好.
First of all首先
do well in在……某方面干得好
【高分句型二】
Besides,I am interested in sports and I have been a volunteer before.此外,我對體育感興趣,我曾經(jīng)是一名志愿者.
?be ?interested in 對…有興趣
(三)【2019 ?浙江省臺州市】
似如你是李華,一個英國游學(xué)團(tuán)要來你們學(xué)校,學(xué)校需要一些志愿者,你想成為其中的一員。請讀下面的招募啟事,寫一封應(yīng)征郵件。
Volunteers Wanted
Some students from the UK will come to our school to have a study tour. They are interested in Chinese culture. We’ re?looking for some volunteers to help us.
Can you introduce yourself(English ability and personality)?
Can you plan an activity about Chinese culture and explain your purpose?
If you are interested, please email us at Andrew@l63. com.
注意:(1)請回復(fù)招募啟事中所提及的兩個問題, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;
??????(2)應(yīng)征郵件中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名和校名等相關(guān)信息;
??????(3)詞數(shù):80~100;
??????(4)郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Andrew,
I’m Li Hua. ________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【參考范文】
Dear Sir,
My name is Li Hua. I'm a 17-year-old girl from Class 3, Grade 2. I would like to become a volunteer for the American students.(點明目的)My English is good and I can talk with foreigner fluently. In addition, I'm interested in sports, which is why I'm in good health.【高分句型一】When my friends get in trouble, I often help them actively. I'm good at taking up with others. Besides I like travelling a lot and I'm quite familiar with our city.(自我介紹)I plan to organize an activity about Chinese traditional culture so that British friends can understand China better.【高分句型二】(計劃的活動)
I'm sure I can become friends with the English students. Looking forward to your answers.(愿望)
Yours,
Li Hua
【名師點評】
【高分句型一】
In addition,I'm interested in sports,which is why I'm in good health.此外,我對體育感興趣,這就是為什么我健康狀況良好.
which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句.
【高分句型二】
I plan to organize an activity about Chinese traditional culture, so that British friends can understand China ?better.我計劃組織一次關(guān)于中國傳統(tǒng)文化的活動,讓英國朋友更好的了解中國.
plan to do sth計劃做某事;so that 引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句
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