2019
Write at least 60 words according to the given information（根據(jù)以下材料，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）
以下是幾位同學(xué)在以貌取人、盲從朋友、看待謊言、抉擇人生等方面的感悟。請(qǐng)從中選擇你比較有感觸的一條，可結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀愕捏w會(huì)。
?Don't judge people by their looks.?Someone could be bad-looking and still be nice.?—Katie
?When your friends do something stupid，you don't have to follow.—Jackie
? Don't tell a teacher your dog ate your homework，especially if you don't have a dog.—Alex
? Life is like a“choose your own ending”?book-you can take whatever adventures you want.
? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?—Sally
（注意：1.先將你選擇的一條感悟抄寫在答題紙帶有引號(hào)的橫線上。
2.短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）
從歷年上海中考英語(yǔ)作文題目可以看出，不論是何種題材，整體都是以鼓勵(lì)發(fā)表自己的看法為主；秉承著讓考生有話可說(shuō)，有內(nèi)容可寫的原則，描述其思想、親身經(jīng)歷、感悟；可寫的角度廣泛，考生可任選一個(gè)內(nèi)容或者角度進(jìn)行切入。
作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
中考作文一般從內(nèi)容、語(yǔ)言、組織結(jié)構(gòu)這三方面進(jìn)行評(píng)分：
（一）內(nèi)容（滿分8）
7-8分：內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。
5-6分：內(nèi)容基本切題，意思大致連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚、但不夠完整。
2-4分：內(nèi)容不夠切題，意思不夠連貫，表達(dá)不夠清楚、有些離題。
0-1分：文不對(duì)題，表達(dá)不清。
（二）語(yǔ)言（滿分8）
詞數(shù)：每少5個(gè)單詞扣0.5分，以此類推。只寫出個(gè)別單詞、詞不成句不給分。
拼寫：每處錯(cuò)誤扣0.5分，同一錯(cuò)誤不重復(fù)計(jì)數(shù)。
語(yǔ)法：每處錯(cuò)誤扣0.5分，同一語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤不重復(fù)扣分。
標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫：每?jī)商庡e(cuò)誤扣0.5分，但扣分總和不超過(guò)1分。
（三）組織結(jié)構(gòu)（滿分4）
內(nèi)容充實(shí)，上下文連貫，用語(yǔ)規(guī)范，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤；詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語(yǔ)者，可給3-4分。
內(nèi)容充實(shí)，不寫廢話，上下文連貫，用語(yǔ)規(guī)范，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，無(wú)或少見語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤；詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語(yǔ)者，可給2分。
一般情況下，內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言累計(jì)得分在15分以上者（含），方可得到1-2分組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。
內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言在15分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表達(dá)，可酌情考慮給1分組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。
通篇句型句式單一、詞匯貧乏者，即使無(wú)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，一般也不予給組織結(jié)構(gòu)分。
精選范文參考
縱觀近年的中考英語(yǔ)作文，可以發(fā)現(xiàn)一些規(guī)律，每一個(gè)作文題目中都有一個(gè)隱藏的“我”，通過(guò)論述自己的經(jīng)歷，表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)和感悟。本文精選2010-2019年上海中考作文優(yōu)質(zhì)例文20篇，希望能給各位學(xué)員帶來(lái)一些啟發(fā)。
2010年上海英語(yǔ)中考作文
I’m proud of myself
范文1?
I am a boy of less confidence. I always hate running. However, as we all know, the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam. At that moment, I just wanted to give up, but my parents encouraged me: "Impossible is nothing," "you could challenge yourself!" so with the encouragement of them, I tried my best to run and insisted on running. When I got to the finishing line, I felt proud of myself, though I didn't get the good mark, I knew I won. I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!
范文2
???I used to be a shy girl with few words. Last month, I failed in the exam. I felt so sad that couldn’t help crying. However, my mother told me, “Life is a tough road full of ups and downs. Everyone has to experience the low times”. Her encouraging words cheered me up. Therefore, I made up my mind to prepare for the next exam. During the class, I always listened to the teachers carefully did my homework attentively. To my surprise, I achieved the best grade in the exam. At that moment, I actually felt proud of myself because of achieving success and courage. Now, I’m more active than before and I always believe as long as you keep trying, you will succeed at last.?
2011年上海英語(yǔ)中考作文
I’m a member of________
范文1
I’m a member of my family
I’m a member of my family. We always help each other and we always face difficulties together. When my father lost his job, my mum and I always encouraged him to be confidence. When I’m still writing homework at eleven o’clock, my parents will give me a cup of milk and a piece of bread. They won’t sleep until I have finished all homework. We love each other and I’m glad to be a member of my family.
范文2
?????????????????????I’m a member of the reading club
I’m a member of the reading club. When I was in my childhood, I took up reading as my hobby. Now I’m a member of the reading club. I feel very delighted for the simple reason that all of the members share our own books with each other. Even if we read the books from morning till night, we never get tired of reading. It is so wonderful and helpful that I enjoy every page of it. In my opinion, reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body. Thanks to the reading club, it enables my life to be more colorful?and meaningful.
2012年上海英語(yǔ)中考作文
Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation (根據(jù)所給情景一封不少于60詞的信)
Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice. （假如你是Joe, 你的好朋友Betty 因?yàn)檫^(guò)于在意考試結(jié)果而感到焦慮。請(qǐng)給她寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶?，并給她一些建議。）
范文1
Dear Betty,
????I’m sorry to know that you are worried about a coming exam because of caring too much about the result. There’s no need to worry about it because you are always good at study. What’s more, it’s necessary for us to know how much knowledge we have mastered by taking an exam. I think you should do have a good rest instead of doing too much exercise because it may make you more nervous. Besides, you can share your feelings with your classmates. It’s useful to share your bad emotion with others, which helps you feel better. I believe that you will try your best to overcome the upset emotion and do well in the exam.
?Yours,
?Joe.
范文2
Dear Betty,
???I’m glad that you’d like to share your feelings with me. In my opinion, there’s no point worrying about an exam too much. For one thing, taking exams is a common thing in a student’s life so that you’d better not care too much about the result. For another, you always have gift for study. Here are some ways to help you deal with the upset feelings. First, you can listen to music which makes you have happy emotions. Second, you should pay attention to how to solve the problems instead of the score. I believe that you will try your best to overcome the upset emotion and do well in the exam.
?Yours,
?Joe
2013年上海英語(yǔ)中考作文
How to protect myself
范文1
As a student, I think it important for me to protect myself from dangerous fire situations. First of all, I must calm down as soon as possible, for panicking is of no help. Then, as is known to all, calling 119 immediately is the most effective way to save myself. What’s more, it is best to take the stairs instead of elevators. In conclusion, with positive attitudes and sufficient preparations, I will be able to protect myself from fires.
范文2
A terrible fire in Jilin took many people’s lives recently and brought endless pains to a large number of families. So if I were caused in a fire, I would try my best to protect myself. First, I would stay calm. A cool head can prevent me from taking rash actions and help pick out a right solution immediately. Then, I would call 119 with my exact location and the situation. Most importantly, I would cover myself with wet clothes and made my way to the secure place. With above tips, I will surely be able to protect myself from fires.
2014年上海英語(yǔ)中考作文
This time next year
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范文1
???It's exciting to imagine what the happy life will be like.
At this time next year, I will be a senior high student, and I will make a lot of new friends. I hope to be more independent so that perhaps I will be taking part in a summer camp abroad to improve my spoken English. Besides, I will help my parents do housework in order to know how to take care of myself when I am alone.
? ?Life will be totally different, but I'm really looking forward to it.
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范文2
? ?Life is changeable, and that's why everyone longs for the future, which is full of challenge as well as hope.
? ? Perhaps I will have achieved my goal this time next year, studying in a senior high school. Despite that, diligence will be still needed to make myself go further in English. Basically, it is important to concentrate in class and take notes carefully. Moreover, I will benefit from reading English books. What’s more, going abroad is of great use in improving my oral English. Only in this way can I progress in English endlessly.
? ?Make plans and go for what I want. And I believe when the challenge is coming, the hope is also around the corner.
2015年上海英語(yǔ)中考作文
I want to invent a family doctor robot
范文1
???I want to invent a family doctor robot, which can be used to cure the illness without going out of their home. As far as I’m concerned, it will be extremely helpful and useful because of the following reasons:
????First, you can see the doctor immediately at home when you feel sick or get hurt. It can save us a lot of time, especially in emergency situations. Furthermore, hospitals today are always filled with patients, not everyone can be taken good care of. However, with the help of our robot doctors, you can talk to your personal doctor one to one whenever you want.
????In short, family doctor robots can make great contribution to our society.
范文2
? ?It is not uncommon to meet traffic problems and serious air?pollution in big?city. It?is?a?must to have a plan to improve the serious condition.
? ?I get an idea to?design my own flying machine like a car which can drive well in?the street?as well as fly between the high rises to avoid the traffic jam. What’s more, when it is moving, it can transform the motion energy into electricity to drive the engine. Thus, it is possible to save a lot of fuel and reduce the air pollution. It is of great use to solve the problems of traffic jam and air pollution, and even save the natural resource.
? ?Bright idea can only be achieved with?the?determination and?courage. I believe my?idea will turn a new leaf of future life.
2016年上海英語(yǔ)中考作文
I’m Ready
范文1
? ? I have always been longing for studying abroad, which is full of challenges as well as opportunities. Therefore, what I should do is to get ready anytime.
? ? As they say, chance favors the prepared mind.?I always get myself ready both?physically and mentally. First, I insist on taking exercise regularly to build up my body. Besides, I?spare?no?effort?to?learn?English well in?order?to?integrate?into?the new?environment?as?soon as?possible.?Last?but not least,?it is?necessary?to?cultivate?a?shinny optimistic attitude?towards difficulties.
? ? With great passion and determination, I am well prepared and deeply convinced that a challenging but fulfilling study life is waiting for me.
范文2
??Frankly speaking, I’ve dreamed of being an excellent photographer since my childhood. The feeling of capturing the beautiful scenery, the charming smile and the unforgettable moment of our life definitely attract me a lot. Therefore, I tried to gain a lot of basic knowledge of photography and took part in the photograph competition in our school.
? ? To my satisfaction, I won the first prize. What I plan to do is to participate in a ‘photography club. In this way, I will not only acquire fantastic theories about photography but also learn a great many valuable skills through interaction with my friends.
? ? I will spare no effort to realize my dream and I am definitely ready to embrace my promising future：to be an excellent photographer.
2017年上海英語(yǔ)中考作文
There is always hope.
范文1
? ?Life is full of ups and downs, so is my middle school life.?
? I used to be a weak girl who had lost heart in various physical activities. Every time I was faced with a physical exam, I couldn't help sweating and feeling nervous. However, after I read an article about a man who was born without?arms and legs, everything changed. Instead of losing hope and giving up, he managed to live like a normal person. Through his story, I suddenly realized that there is always hope and nothing is impossible for a willing heart. Unexpectedly, I finally started to make progress in physical activities! ???????
? ?After all, hope never fails to make a miracle, does it?
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范文2
I visited Guzhuang Village in Guangxi with my mother last year. The children are of my age but live a different life: potato is their daily food and meat is a luxury; parents work in big cities and seldom come back; their classroom is a “shelter”- cold in winter and hot in summer. Their life is full of hardship, however, I can see hope and happiness in their eyes: the hope that their life will be changed with their own efforts. Stephen Hawking once said “ Nobody should lose hope however bad the situation is”. I couldn’t really understand this until that day.?
2018年上海英語(yǔ)中考作文
My progress
范文1
? Life is full of ups and downs, so is my middle school life.?
? I used to be a shy girl who dare not exchange my ideas with my classmates, which is extremely bad for my study. Therefore, I made up my mind to become more outgoing. At first, it was tough for me to involve myself in the group discussion or to join in after-school activities. Luckily, with the encouragement from my friends, I managed to express my own thoughts and do some volunteering in my spare time. It seems that I am not that shy girl any more, which is definitely a great progress I have ever made.?
? Just as an old saying goes, a thousand-li journey begins with the first step. However difficult it is, I should take the first step and make progress little by little.
范文2
? I used to be poor at English,?especially?in reading and writing, which?I consider?extremely?difficult.?The biggest problem was?that after reading a passage, I couldn’t fully understand it,?which?makes me feel very?depressed?and?frustrated. But I kept on reading difficult English articles?instead of?just giving up. And I also practiced English writing?whenever?I had a chance. Gradually, I?made?remarkable?progress?in English and gained a lot of confidence through my?constant effort. As you can imagine,?nothing?makes me prouder than feeling my progress in English. My dear reader,?as long as?you bravely face your weaknesses and take?effective?ways to?overcome?them, I believe you will, like I do, be able to see your progress in yourself.
2019年上海英語(yǔ)中考作文
作文使用D篇閱讀文本中的四條感悟作為提示，請(qǐng)學(xué)生結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷談?wù)劯形颍?
1.When your friend does something stupid, you don't need to follow.??
2.judge a book by its cover.???
3.Life is a book in which you can choose your ending.???
4.You shouldn't tell your teacher that your dog ate your homework, especially you don't have a dog.??
范文1
Don't judge a book by its cover.? ?
? Many people, sometimes myself included, tend to judge a person by his appearances.
? I was afraid of my uncle who has a scared tattoo on his arm till my mother told me a “story”. When I was a three-year-old naught boy, I always ran around the neighborhood with my toy saber. Unfortunately, one day I hit a wild dog by accident. The dog became crazy and tried to bite me. It was that time my uncle appeared and protected me with his strong arm. However, this accident left a scar on his arm. My uncle went to get a tattoo in order to cover up the scars. From that moment, he is my hero instead of a bad looking uncle.
Therefore, we need to go beyond people’s looks and focus on more internal spirits in order to truly judge a person.?
范文2
Honesty is gold
? Honesty, as far as I am concerned, is one of the most important virtues in one’s life. And if you keep honest to others, you will receive the honesty as well. ??Instead, if you lie to someone, the only you can get is another lie.
? ?When I was seven years old, my desk mate Tom bought a new pencil box. It looks so pretty that I liked it very much. Shamefully, I took his pencil box without telling him anything and he cried a lot when he found that his pencil box was gone. After several days, I can’t bear this kind of contradiction, so I returned his pencil box and confessed that it was me who had stolen his pencil box. To my surprise, he didn’t blame me but gave it back to me as a gift.
? From then on, I realized that I can never lie to anyone again.?Honesty is a must not only for friendship but also for our whole society as it is the fundamental thing between people and the stability of the development of our motherland.??