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上學(xué)期六年級(jí)英語(yǔ)期中試卷分類匯編
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66.Writing （作文）
Write at least 45 words according to the given situation. （根據(jù)所給情境，寫一篇不少于45個(gè)詞的短文。標(biāo)點(diǎn)不占格。）
Kitty is writing about her future job. Please help her finish her passage according to the given information. Kitty 正寫一篇有關(guān)她的未來工作的文章。請(qǐng)幫助她根據(jù)所給信息完成這篇文章。
Name: ____________
Future job; ____________
Reasons（理由）：____________
Something about me:________________________
I should ____________________________________ to be a ____________.
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注意：
1. 請(qǐng)運(yùn)用上述信息并展開合理想象將不足的信息補(bǔ)充完整，你還可以根據(jù)題目，適當(dāng)增加一些內(nèi)容。
2. 短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。
【答案】My life in 20 years
?????My name is Kate. I’m always working hard for a bright future I imagine. Life in 20 years will ?be busy and wonderful. As for my job, I will be a doctor. It’s my dream job because I can save lots of people’s lives. I will take on new challenges because I love it. My parents will be too old to take care of themselves twenty years later. So taking good care of them will be my duty. I will have many friends who I can talk about the past school life with. It will be funny to talk with them. Besides, life in 20 years will sure be wonderful. With the technology development, robots will play an important role in twenty years. Every family will have one or more of them, so will I. My children will learn from the Internet, which would save all the paper needed to print textbooks.
In a word
?I will always try my best to make it possible to have a better life!
【解析】
【詳解】1. 題干解讀：文章主要以描述將來的生活為主展開討論，重點(diǎn)是對(duì)將來工作展開暢想，將來會(huì)喜歡什么樣的工作，選擇這個(gè)工作的原因是什么，以及自己的一些其他方面的事情。
2. 例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章主要采取將來時(shí)對(duì)未來工作的暢想的描述。包括對(duì)未來工作的期待和選擇原因的描述。語(yǔ)言表達(dá)簡(jiǎn)單明了，語(yǔ)句通俗易懂，表達(dá)意思完整明確。
3.高分亮點(diǎn)：
短語(yǔ)：lots of；too … to；take care of；talk about；play an important role。
句型：because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句；who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句；which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句。
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60.Write a passage of at least 50?words on the topic“Plan a visit” (以“計(jì)劃一次出游”為題寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50個(gè), 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名或校名。
Suggested questions
Which place are you going to visit?
When are you going to visit the place?
What are you going to do in the place?
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【答案】Plan a visit
This week I am going to Beijing by train with my parents. We will visit Tian’anmen Square, the Monument to the People’s Heroes on the first day. We will visit the Summer Palace and climb the Great Wall on the second day. We will eat Beijing roast duck ,too. I think we will have a good time.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇為材料作文，要求按照提示完成一篇出游計(jì)劃，要求短文要包含題干提示的問題；適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，語(yǔ)言連貫，邏輯清晰。
【詳解】1.題干解讀：本篇材料作文用第一人稱完成一篇出游計(jì)劃，講述計(jì)劃中的事情用一般將來時(shí)；書寫時(shí)要注意文句通順，內(nèi)容完整。
2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：本例文結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明。開篇緊扣主題，介紹計(jì)劃出游的城市；接下來介紹要參觀的景點(diǎn)和時(shí)間；文章布局合理，內(nèi)容完整連貫。
3.高分亮點(diǎn)：本篇例文文句簡(jiǎn)短、短語(yǔ)豐富。用“will+動(dòng)詞原形”介紹出游的景點(diǎn)；用on the first day；on the second day有條理地介紹要參觀的景點(diǎn)和時(shí)間；行文通暢，內(nèi)容完整。
【點(diǎn)睛】本篇短文是計(jì)劃一次出游，要用一般將來時(shí)完成短文，書寫時(shí)要圍繞題干提示的問題“去哪里、什么時(shí)間、參觀什么”
展開。
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VIII. Writing (作文) (共10分)
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Write a passage of at least 50?words on the topic“Plan a visit” (以“計(jì)劃一次出游”為題寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50個(gè), 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名或校名)
Suggested questions
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Which place are you going to visit?
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When are you going to visit the place?
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What are you going to do in the place?
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答案：
Section B: write at least 50 words about the topic “My Good Friend” (以“我的好朋友”為題，至少寫50詞，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）（6分）
Suggested questions:
1. Who is your good friend?
2. Why do you like him/her?
3. What do you do with him/her?
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答案：
VIII. Writing (寫話) （共6分）
86. Write a short passage on the topic “My good friend ” in at least six sentences. (以“我的好朋友”為題, 至少用6句話，寫一段短文，要求緊扣主題，語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫。)
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的信息）
(以下問題供參考)
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Who is your good friend?
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What’s he/she like?
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What do you often do with him/her?
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My good friend
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答案：
B. Write a passage of at least 50 words about the topic “I would like to be ______”. (以“我想成為________”為題寫一篇不少于50詞的短文。)6分
Use the following points as a reference. (以下內(nèi)容僅供參考)
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What would you like to be?
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Why would you like to be …?
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What will you do for your future?
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答案：
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