思路索引
題型特點分析
歷年中考作文要求字數(shù)不少于60個詞，題目往往有3個左右guides?提示，考生基本可以根據(jù)相關(guān)提示列出較清晰的提綱；內(nèi)容可以側(cè)重議論，也可以夾敘夾議；
近幾年寫作中純記敘或者純議論的文章逐漸淡出我們的視線，多為由敘引議，敘議結(jié)合的夾敘夾議文。這樣的出題模式對于學生來說無疑增加了很大的難度，如何很好的把握夾敘夾議的作文？下面讓我們層層分析，揭開這層神秘的面紗。
中考夾敘夾議作文特點分析
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與考生"I"生活緊密相關(guān)
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降低學生依賴寫作模板的可能性
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關(guān)注學生個人的情感表達
訓(xùn)練指導(dǎo)
3+1的綜合寫作模式
3= ?對三個問題的完整回答
+= ?對某個重點問題的擴寫
1= ?點睛之句的點題和收尾
典型例題
The most important things in my life
Use the following points as a guide:
l?What are the important things in your life?
l?Which one do you think is the most important ?thing?
l?Why do you think so?
3個問題
Q1: ?What are the important things in your life?
??Learning?to be brave, learning to be confident are the important things in my life.
Q2: ?Which one do you think is the most important thing?
??I think learning to share is the most important.
Q3: ?Why do you think so?
??It enables us to get more ideas or experience from others. It also shows that we have the ability and will to help others.
重點擴寫
“Share” is another word for “ exchange with each other”.
點題收尾
開頭：?There are always many important things that may happen in our life.
結(jié)尾：As a famous saying goes “One flower makes no garden”, so we should learn to share with others.
使用習語諺語
平時詞匯教學中積累習語和諺語:
??full ---- ?Life is full of hope.
??gain ---- ?No pains, no gains.
??practice ---- Practice makes perfect. ?
??talent ?---- There must be a use for my talent.
??indeed ?---- ?A friend in need is a friend indeed.
??dull ?---- ?All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
??healthy---- ??Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, ?wealthy and wise.
??way ---- ???Where there is a will, there is a way.
??learn ---- ???It’s never too late to learn.
??success---- ?The secret of success is to believe in yourself.
學生作文:
There are many important things in my life, such as my eyesight, my subjects. Now, the most important thing in my life is the test in June. If I do well in it, I will study in a good school, but if I do badly in it, I will study in a school that I don’t want. It’s very important, I think. (62字)
點評：內(nèi)容空泛， 選材俗套，結(jié)構(gòu)不嚴謹，缺乏立意深刻的中心意思的表達。
修改1：
????There are always many important things that may happen in our life. Among them, learning to be brave, learning to be confident are the important things in my life. I think learning to share is the most important. “Share” is another word for “ exchange with each other”. It enables us to get more ideas or experience from others. It also shows that we have the ability and will to help others. As a famous saying goes “One flower makes no garden”, so we should learn to share with others.
（共87字）
修改2：
Life is just like a painting, colorful and meaningful.??There are always many important things that may happen in our life.Among them, learning to be brave, learning to be confident are the important things in my life. I think learning to share is the most important.Why do I think so??“Share” is another word for “ exchange with each other”. It enables us to get more ideas or experience from others. It also shows that we have the ability and will to help others.That can help us to have more friends. In my opinion, learning to share is a kind of ?“l(fā)ife skills”.??As a famous saying goes “One flower makes no garden”, so we should learn to share with others. ????（共119字）
注意
1.?議論性的短文很重要的是要寫好主題句和結(jié)尾句。
2.?議論文多用一般現(xiàn)在時。
范文賞析
Writing at least 60 words about the topic “Things I Hate to Do”( 以“我不喜歡……”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)
( 注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。段文開頭已給，所給部分不計入字數(shù)。)
Use the following points as a guide. (短文須包含下列要點)
u?What are the things that you hate to do?
u?What do you hate doing most? Why? (Give at least two reasons.)
There is no denying that everyone has something to hate, so do I. Nothing is more hateable than to do housework, because it makes me feel tired. Another thing I hate to do is travelling with my parents. I always stay with them without freedom. In addition, I don’t like eating vegetables either. They taste terrible ,but my mother always tell me they are good for my health and let me eat. Oh, my God, what should I do?
【評析】
1. 好句型：
1)?There is no denying that….
2)?Nothing is more than hateable than to do….
3)?Another thing I hate to do is….
4)?In addition,….
5)?are good for….
2.?注意審題， 題目things i hate to do 表示要寫幾件事，而不是1件；此外，雖是hate to do,不可以寫一些消極的內(nèi)容。文章內(nèi)容還可以涉及環(huán)保、浪費等話題。
小Tps:
1?在敘議結(jié)合的文章中，切記的是敘事的內(nèi)容不能大于議論的內(nèi)容，必須明確由敘事引出議論的內(nèi)容，中心點在于議論而非敘事。
2 夾敘夾議的文章中所寫的事件不需要寫一些很大的事件，推薦使用的一些故事就是身邊發(fā)生的，與大家息息相關(guān)的事例，這樣更加貼近生活，更加真實可信，記住由敘引議，升華主題。
訓(xùn)練：
You must have got some help from someone or something in your life. They have taught you something important. They have encouraged you to go through the most difficult time. Or they have even changed your life. Why not write down your gratitude to them? Please write at least 60 words about the topic “ I want to say thanks to my______”. （生活中，或許有某個人，某件事，某····幫助過你，鼓勵過你，給你帶來過一些人生的其實，或許改變了你的生活，又或許····。?為什么不提筆寫下你對他們的感激之詞呢？?以我想對···說聲謝謝為題寫一篇不少于60個字的短文，標點符號不占格。）
【參考范文】
范文1
I want to say thanks to my friend
There’s an old saying, ‘A friend in need is a friend indeed.’ During last summer vacation, I had an operation and couldn’t go to school until October. I was rather worried about my study.?
However, it was my best friend who took down notes for me. She also reminded me of the key points. I was really grateful to her because I believed that that was what friends are for. Thank you, my friend, for what you did when I needed help.
范文2
I want to say thanks to my father
I’d like to say thanks to my father, who has always been giving, without ever asking for a reward.
It is said that parents are the very first teachers to a child. To me, my father is a great teacher and, at the same time, a sincere friend. Unlike the deep, sweet love from my mother, that from my father is wise, which helps me improve. It’s he who cheers me up when I lose my heart and pushes me forward when I succeed.
I want to say thanks to my father for his love and help, which accompanies me throughout my growth.?